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jwebs
Junior Member

since 2006-08-15

Posts 25
Ft Hood, TX

0 posted 2006-09-08 03:30 PM

sunlight on roses
a late summer breeze
clouds floating by
like boats on a lake
fishing
going nowhere fast
searching
for a reason to last
blades of grass
wild and free
going where they will
chaos unleashed
butterfly wings
add color to the scene
a robin sings
of what he's seen
laying on a hill
in an autumnesque mood
thinking of the colors
soon to mix
watching the sunset
in red blue and yellow too
watercolors set in motion
painted just for you
stars come out
to twinkle and shine
stealing the spotlight
with magic
off in the distance
fireworks call
rolling through the clouds
that got so tall
spreading out
in booms and snaps
bright lights fading
passing with time
as light appears
on the horizon it poses
as the sun hovers
putting sunlight on roses

No one is more professional than I. I am a Noncommissioned Officer, a leader of soldiers.

© Copyright 2006 James Webster - All Rights Reserved

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-09-08 04:36 PM

Lovely...absolutely beautiful!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-09-08 04:51 PM

delightful images jwebs...
I enjoyed it

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

3 posted 2006-09-08 08:48 PM

A real pleasure to read.

Rae

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-09-08 09:59 PM

"No one is more professional than I. I am a Noncommissioned Officer, a leader of soldiers."

And you write, too.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

5 posted 2006-09-08 11:20 PM

I love all the lines,
this is my favourite.

"clouds floating by
like boats on a lake"

such serenity...

enjoyed.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2006-09-09 12:39 PM

Can I take a breath?

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-09-12 05:49 PM

Breathtakenly beauteous!

"watercolors set in motion"

~ Indeed! You have done exactly that!

Peace, Love & Light,

EA

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-09-12 05:59 PM

Very lovely!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2006-09-12 07:42 PM

The scene you painted with words...well, I wanted to be there...very beautiful!

Spike Daft
Junior Member

since 2006-09-12

Posts 23
CA, USA

10 posted 2006-09-12 11:22 PM

Beautiful imagery! I really like the title, too.

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