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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I will hurry on beyond the cipher while my wings are molten sounds that change the minds of arrows from the drunken cupid's lucidity the hair of trees needs combing and I will loan her my winds and a discontented smile insincere for momentary lifetimes while she dresses her mornings with the hardness of unripened fruit in waxed bowl presentation and though her eyes are pleading for my hands to crush the virginity of something not ready to occur I will keep them folded as stones underneath her boredom's bedroom to bruise her heals when she dances _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-06-2006 09:18 AM).] |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Even half asleep, I love this. What a wonderful way to wake up. Thank you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, thanks sleey head..(dribbling cold water down your back) |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
That is just cruel!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Read this earlier this morning whilst my mind was still collecting morning thoughts, so figured I would wait till the mind was clearer....lol....Its still sortah clouded with thoughts this afternoon  , so will just tell you how much I love this. Much enjoyed this, m'dark buddie....It is always good to see your smile on a Monday morning! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks lady friend |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
There is always such a profound comfort in reading your work. When the last word has been absorbed, and my mind begins to spin back down to earth, I realize you have done it again. Yes, comfort, in that once again I was not dissappointed. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, why thank you lady friend |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger the sight of your hands folded as stones dances my heart nice one... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thanks little lady, you smile me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love your dark,every tantalising tormented drop. Kethry |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K, you make me smile lady!! thanks |
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