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marcel
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since 2003-03-02
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az, usa

0 posted 2006-11-06 01:46 AM



More than Physical

It is the little things that mean the most
At the end of all days and words
That keeps a love breathing and alive
When my past questions your motives
And you encourage our future
To not look behind to nails that snag
On the fabrics of what we have sewn ourselves to be
Even when our passion seeps as soggy hats
Dripping selfishness and sorrow into my eyes,
Not appreciating the heart of an innocent woman…

But it is the little things you do
Like being faithful and kissing me sweetly,
Making me ashamed at my discontent
Because I know your love for me is strong
As you adjust to the hormonal changes of time…

It is the little things you do for me
That makes me love you more than you know.

Marcel



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gypsyheartx
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since 2006-02-09
Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland
1 posted 2006-11-06 01:50 AM


"To not look behind to nails that snag
On the fabrics of what we have sewn ourselves to be"

What a beautiful write, it was greatly enjoyed.
~Miranda~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2006-11-06 07:45 AM


Changes are difficult.
You write beautiful poetry.

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