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JLHunter
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0 posted 2006-11-05 08:38 PM


What Once Smelled Sweet

Wind-swept rain showers
Scour my soul of your scent,
A bitter perfume.



I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-05 08:43 PM


understood and felt deeply
JLHunter
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2 posted 2006-11-05 08:55 PM


Hi, Shadows.

Wow you're quick!  That's the fastest respone that I've ever had!

Anyhow, thanks for the comment of kindred emotions...



John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-11-05 10:01 PM



oh yes John
excellent


JLHunter
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4 posted 2006-11-05 11:52 PM


Thanks, TL.

I need the kind words right now...I had a rough day.



John xo

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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