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Open Poetry #39

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Aeris Nicole
Junior Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 21

0 posted 2006-11-05 05:37 PM

Never thought you'd go so low,
but now your colors start to show.
I'm waking up it's been so long,
and now I see you were wrong.
Always thought you were the one,
and now I'm happy that you're gone.
Hate me now, I hate you more,
how could you ever be adored.
A jealous image from my past,
how could I think that we would last?
You set me free these wings I've grown,
now I'll fly on my own.
Never before seen through these eyes,
but now they're open and I'm not blind.
I see the truth I see through you,
an empty soul I never knew.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-11-05 07:45 PM

There is grace within your pen, and strength within your words.
Welcome to Passions.
TD

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-11-05 11:26 PM

Nice flow of release.
But let the hate thoughts go, or they will eat away at whatever fragments of beauty that love, even lost love, may have left behind.

Aeris Nicole
Junior Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 21

3 posted 2006-11-06 02:13 PM

thanks guys, means alot

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