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Losing It
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Losing It |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
I may have lost it at the party But would have sworn I had it then Could that really be last summer? I don’t suppose it matters when. I remember when I wore it Walking through the park at night Yours was always somehow better Mine could never be so bright. When you giggled it was there When you kissed me, for a while, Then you left…now I remember Exactly when I lost my smile. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hit hard... This one...smacks with reality...took a turn I didn't expect. You are growing in your art...exponentially. Write ON! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Interesting twist at the end. I enjoyed this You can never win or lose |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
sadness of light hearted kind. Who knew the hurt? |
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