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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2006-11-04 06:01 AM



On the days he gets annoyed everything changes
The world does not bounce does not sing
Everything is the same yet different darker
You take away his loves his happiness
Then the world becomes a shadow of itself
An acheing torrent you would rather be out than in

You never knew why this was, did you?
Somedays you would wake and the sky would be dark
The world would throb with foreboding
Everything would just lay out before you
The world would show you its scars
You didn't know why but it was him, annoyed.

He feels threatened by the changes you make
He feel the dark slipping in around him
His tears are a beacon to the otherside
Come, come feast on the light weakened by hate
He is the harbinger of the coming of the dark
He is guardian to the gates of the seven hells.

Still you mock him, fair skin, Dark hair
Still you taunt him, red eyes, soft heart.
And the darkness comes out once again
The tornados ride, the lightning falls as rain
The rivers run as blood, the cities cry in silence
And you all feel it in you, you feel his pain.

Should you fear him? destroyer, bringer of the night
Should you pity him, Lonely, child of the rain
One whose tears invoke the floods of babylon
One whose shuddering causes quakes around the world
Yet he is unaware just a small child
And as the bullies fists fall the wars begin.  

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.


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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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1 posted 2006-11-04 08:54 AM


I read this; it's not a promising future for the material minded, and even less for those who lie, mock, and harm the innocent. It's strange that the number 7 comes up in reference to the gates of hell, as 7 is the number of the unknown.  Ignorance is not bliss in this case.  
marcel
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2 posted 2006-11-05 10:04 PM


powerful even to its subtle meaning of what we are......
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