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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-11-04 01:23 AM


Damn!  Triolets are hard to write
Words rush by at full-throttle
Tequila might bring creativity to light
Damn!  Triolets are hard to write
Sipping and writing all the night
I may need more than one bottle
Damn!  Triolets are hard to write
Words rush by at full-throttle

aziza

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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2006-11-04 07:18 AM


*grins*  love it!
now quit bogarting the takillya

~*S*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-11-04 09:46 AM


oh gawd...I can't even stand the thought of tequila *shivers*
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-11-04 12:01 PM


Bravo! If you don't mind, I'd like to add this to my folder of poetic forms. This is a fine example of a triolet!

Loving Light,

EA

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2006-11-04 02:20 PM


aziza
But worth while reading, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-11-04 02:33 PM


An excellent one at that!
Good form.
Hugs~Nancy

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2006-11-04 08:41 PM


Thank you, my friends.
Linda, please do use this in any way you wish.  

You all are a joy to me.

A

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
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Oklahoma, USA
7 posted 2006-11-04 11:22 PM


You made this look so easy. You tamed it quite well. A clever piece of work. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2006-11-04 11:58 PM



throttle that bottle!

seraphin
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Michigan
9 posted 2006-11-05 12:01 PM


You are a wonder!
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