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rev. black and decker road
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rev. black and decker road |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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on the spinnaker side of sundown sound I can hear the asphalt speak graveleeze new road's been born down behind the trees it has a soul of woman in her curves deadly but fascination without a boundary they say the lines are missing on purpose in case one wants a turn off to heaven without waiting for a wide spot or directions from those who went before and then there are the hell bound hounds that pant the slivers edge nightly with metal lanterns hanging from their eyes they blind side her gullies with leather and mate her wound with metal brittle leaving their seeds scattered on her winds spent like sea shells on children's laughter _______________ daark scribblenote: from the 101 down to ms labu' the metal boys grind some skin on this cruvey piece of music [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-03-2006 10:34 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
beautiful blacktopped sounds, poet... thank you for the morning ride.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh yeah, this took me there. This ones just to dayummm awesome dude Dark.! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend ________ ms gs, thank you for the eyes |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger I wanna see sundown sound hell bound hounds the wide turn off to heaven… with your eyes send me a map? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...I think I've been there but for some reason it just didn't look the same. "spent like sea shells on children's laughter" Lovely line!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
driving Decker was always an adventure even on full moon nights oh, you took me back on a winding path, convoluted memories... is Millie still alive??? guess I had my own side trip with this one, DS |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Your writing is as mesmerizing as that road -- it too takes me on a journey with no lines. aziza |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
With each word, you draw me in. With each line, you spin me. With each new thought, I become mesmerized. 'tis the gift of dark. Sandra |
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