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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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0 posted 2006-11-02 10:20 PM


The Correction


Yes I’m fourteen, but don’t underestimate.
I fought the battle to open the gate of my desired fate;
I write poems full of hate to oppress the ones that give me bad rates.
Not those at PipTalk those are my side mates.
Learn to appreciate, you don’t always have to compensate.
Open your eyes! It came to your surprise that I have you as bait,
Don’t try to deviate,
For you are too late,
From a scale out of one to a thousand, you are only eight.
Get off my back, throwing on all this weight.
This is not a given trait,

You are so devastated…
You better thank goodness that a while back we dissociated.


© Copyright 2006 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-11-04 11:12 PM


Mr. O

I like.

A

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