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A Lost Poem
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A Lost Poem |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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A Lost Poem It has taken the grist of a full day to expose this night, after great probing, only to discern the moment’s gel hasn’t yet fully congealed, as thoughts are like minute white whales ~ whipping snippets of poems and their beginnings trailing through salt water kisses, any likening of self to some great artist falls false among another’s own shadows, myriad showings slicing reality and I tremble, for the moon shall rise almost a full body of itself, still, and enough, strong and willed, bluish white trails to follow as it lights the ground and leaves… me unfulfilled. Oh! Yet, those scenic dreams of yestermorn… amid awakenings and substance fleeting even as Ingmar’s dreams of fear and consciousness arise, finding some pride in manhood, some sense of time, some control, as transitory as an ashen whale…Ingmar’s accent colors my hearing, even as a spine straightens under parental control; ethnicity leaks stronger into this vessel. Somewhere in life’s blue blood, before particles of air hit corpuscles and redden, some long ago Viking mixed minutia over some winsome Germanic maid, under a sequined sky or perhaps…under Thor’s hammer’d sparks, creating the dreamers of another world, certainly one in Ingmar; and if I listen closely, I harvest skeins of light, that there is still poverty in what I know; but! the desire to attain more in the way of edification, through the soul of hunger…ah… Feed me, and I shall fill the moon with dreams. ~*~ After listening to an interview of Ingmar Bergman " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....It is wonderful to be inspired and to write something so wonderful from it that the inspirer would be proud to hear it. This is such a poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! Love the poem and the new pic! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
an outstanding work Karilea I like the new picture too... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
OUTSTANDING! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Spot Junior Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 45CA, US |
amazing. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Superb! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'll be keeping this one. It breathes... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The way it is written is so important here, and the subject matter is important too, but it is woven with skill and care and comes to life with seasoned knowledge..thank you..K... Goldenrose. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I'm glad this poem is not lost anymore. Very lovely. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Feed me, and I shall fill the moon with dreams. And so you do....not "shall", do. This extraordinary poem is a case in point! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
E X Q U I S I T E ! ! No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Karilea, There's something hauntingly beautiful in this write and although I highlight the following, I know there is more. "there is still poverty in what I know; but! the desire to attain more in the way of edification, through the soul of hunger" And so shall it be given to those who seek. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You were wonderfully inspired, dear Karilea. There are true heights in this poem, yes I am sure Ingmar is honored by your work ... because of course he now perceives everything interdimensionally ... ... nothing is ever lost! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Truly beautiful words from an inspired pen, you can really write darling heart and I utterly love it as always Mushy x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"and if I listen closely, I harvest skeins of light, that there is still poverty in what I know; but! the desire to attain more in the way of edification, through the soul of hunger…ah… Feed me, and I shall fill the moon with dreams." Most excellent, SIL!  ...jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."and if I listen closely, I harvest skeins of light, that there is still poverty in what I know; but! the desire to attain more in the way of edification, through the soul of hunger…ah… Feed me, and I shall fill the moon with dreams." OK...this is my favorite of all my favorites you have written to my eyes. What an outstanding verse~ Hugs, TD |
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