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Mr. Omniscient
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0 posted 2006-11-01 08:32 PM


I don’t know what it is when I look into your eyes…
I feel as if I’m at an award ceremony and they ask me to rise…
And I feel greed because … well…I’ve already accepted my prize.

In case you're getting the wrong idea. I was simply stating that you couldn't want anymore because you already have it.

[This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (11-02-2006 05:02 PM).]

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passing shadows
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marcel
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az, usa
2 posted 2006-11-02 04:53 PM


sometimes, it is just the thought........
writergrl
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3 posted 2006-11-02 05:00 PM


lovely, simply lovely; in its brevity this spoke volumes!!!

writergrl

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Nicholas Nickleby

sandgrain
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4 posted 2006-11-02 05:05 PM


Sweet!  I'm curious about your screen name.  Want to tell us why you came up with it?

   Rae

DreamerSpirit
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5 posted 2006-11-02 05:08 PM


all i can say is WOW...
excellent..it was brief but made me think a lot!
Good Work.!


Mr. Omniscient
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6 posted 2006-11-02 05:27 PM


"Omniscient" means "All knowing" don't take it as if I'm full of myself though. Just most of the stories I write are in Omniscient form; plus I like the sound of it,"Mr. Omniscient"
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