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Open Poetry #39

Something about your eyes

Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

0 posted 2006-11-01 08:32 PM

I don’t know what it is when I look into your eyes…
I feel as if I’m at an award ceremony and they ask me to rise…
And I feel greed because … well…I’ve already accepted my prize.

In case you're getting the wrong idea. I was simply stating that you couldn't want anymore because you already have it.

[This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (11-02-2006 05:02 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-01 08:58 PM

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

2 posted 2006-11-02 04:53 PM

sometimes, it is just the thought........

writergrl
Member

since 2006-10-30

Posts 73
Las Vegas, Nevada

3 posted 2006-11-02 05:00 PM

lovely, simply lovely; in its brevity this spoke volumes!!!

writergrl

"You cannot stain a black coat."
Nicholas Nickleby

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

4 posted 2006-11-02 05:05 PM

Sweet! I'm curious about your screen name. Want to tell us why you came up with it?

Rae

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

5 posted 2006-11-02 05:08 PM

all i can say is WOW...
excellent..it was brief but made me think a lot!
Good Work.!

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

6 posted 2006-11-02 05:27 PM

"Omniscient" means "All knowing" don't take it as if I'm full of myself though. Just most of the stories I write are in Omniscient form; plus I like the sound of it,"Mr. Omniscient"

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