Open Poetry #39 |
Come Sweet Sleep |
amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Night creeps in, heavy is the sleep on eyes that have seen their share of crying past midnight into the dawn sleep comes no more when lines are drawn acrossed eyelids sheltered behind glasses of rose where sleeplessness does impose burdens of night blend into day come sweet sleep oh please, I pray. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcoming you, and wishing you a pleasant nights sleep. I like your pen name! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions...a wonderful release of creative thoughts here. TD |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Thank you Midnitesun for welcoming me and for your kind thoughts |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Thank you TD. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, a nice blending of two surges of emotion. Don't ya just hate when sleep does not come easily....too often our minds have a lot to do with it... |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Magnus thank you for reading and commenting. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, you welcome Morpheus well... So we shall welcome you to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Said so beautifully , I can relate , sleep does not come easily for me Hope |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
been following you all evening amberhues saved this for last it was a wise choice welcome to passions and I hope sleep seeks you out tonight |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
amber, your penspeak is enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amber~ Another warm WELCOME to you~ Enjoyed your spill of ink~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages Youwill like it here! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome...I really enjoyed your poem. You've found a place to come when sleeplessness hits you..I know. I'm an insomniac a lot of the time. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome! I think you might find a few more of the sleep deprived here. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This is the second poem (in two days) that has me dancin’ the ‘Shakespeherian Rag’ [..and, yes, that’s spelled that way on purpose!]...(to sleep perchance to dream; etc.)....and it also slips me into that state of 'poetically-induced' dejavu... that this is a slice of the “every-person's" life kinda’ feelin’...that ’been there/done that'(many times) state of consciousness.... wherein similarities of experience make one feel not so ‘alone’; etc.! Thank you for this write! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Much enjoyed your first post!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Amber and welcome to Passions In Poetry. I know you will like it here amongst these talented poets. Hugs, Ethel |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Thank you each for welcoming me to Piptalk. I have found so much talent here!! |
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