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Spun from Stone ( Halloween Repost )
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Spun from Stone ( Halloween Repost ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Note: For those who missed it, this first appeared as a reply under Serenitys' " of ecstacy with my eyes closed " having been inspired by her wonderfully creative verb " dervishing " Spun from Stone Abruptly been awakened, dervishing out of a dream with vacant eyes unfocused as of yet upon this world, to slice through fog like layers, comprehension it would seem arrives an instant later as I peer from this fascade. With frozen stone of talons fastened tightly to this ledge, await their grip to loosen as the hour comes to close. To glide the night air currents, freed again from anchorage All Hallows' Eve rejoining this, the world of flesh and bone. Too long enslaved by those who scurry mindlessly below, my pulse begins to quicken as I watch them from above. The dervishing intensifies, each molecule aglow, long centuries behind me now I'm weightless to the skies. An instrument of mythos having found the means for flight Exhilarant I circle, dervishing into the night. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (11-01-2006 08:44 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I can just feel this. Beautifully vivid! Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent work, Doc! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like the sheer magnitude of the imagery in this one. Excellent! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Glad you reposted. I enjoyed it very much. Rae |
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