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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2006-10-31 10:46 AM


    
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Haunted Hollow
~ Linda L. Dowd ~

One moonless night in Haunted Hollow,
I lost my way ~ no star to follow.
Fear gripped my heart in icy hold,
As horror stories I'd been told,
Flashed through my mind and made me weak,
~ I could not move ~ Nor could I speak.

There stood I, alone and shaking,
As dead rose up this night of waking.
Phantom fingers did poke and prod,
But I could not run from stinking sod.
Fear did freeze my guttural scream,
~ Was this real? ~ Or just a dream?
Then from the depths of Haunted Hollow,
Came a horseman gaunt and sallow,
Riding fast on midnight steed,
With soul intent on me to feed.
Hoof beats thundered as he drew near.
His evil face was drawn in sneer.
I prayed the ghost would pass me by,
But the time had come for me to die.
He raised a scythe above his head,
I wailed in anguish as I dropped dead...

One moonless night in Haunted Hollow,
I lost my way ~ no star to follow.
Fear gripped my heart in icy hold,
As horror stories I'd been told,
Flashed through my mind and made me weak,
~ I could not move ~ I could not speak.

~ Now I ride a midnight steed,
And look for souls on which to feed.



© Copyright 2006 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-10-31 11:41 AM


Earth Angel
LOL so thats how you became an angel. Wonderful write.

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2 posted 2006-10-31 12:01 PM


ghoulish

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-10-31 12:03 PM



Now Linda...You just know I love this!

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Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-10-31 02:16 PM


Mr. T. ~

Where there's the light of yang, there is also a bit of the shadow yin.


EA


Earth Angel
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5 posted 2006-10-31 02:20 PM


Cantelouper ~ Ooops! I mean "Anteloper" ~ Oh, gosh, I meant to write "Interloper"!

Beware of "angels" who slip their halos, wings, and vestments off at night! BOO!



Linda Lou the Ghoul

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-10-31 02:22 PM


Nice Nancy ~

You are one who always gets into the spirit of the seasons and holidays of the year!

Sending you a "Boo!" 'n a Halloween kiss,

Linda

Margherita
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7 posted 2006-10-31 05:59 PM


Gosh, dear Linda, this is powerful! I feel haunted ...
Only a fearless Angel could write in such nonchalant manner.
This evening while I was in the elevator the light went out, I descended in darkness but arrived safely, with just a hint of worry ...the guardian down at the entrance laughed and said someone was playing a trick! who knows?!

Love and Happy Halloween!
Margherita

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8 posted 2006-10-31 07:10 PM


Yikes !!  Scarey writing for sure !
Made me almost choke on my .... err...the kids Hallowe'en treats.
hugs, Chris

Sunshine
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9 posted 2006-10-31 07:26 PM


A wonderful take on the
Headless Horseman, Linda!

Thoroughly enjoyed
the presentation
and lexis...some good use there,
of words we don't hear every day...

Well done!


PEBBLES
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10 posted 2006-10-31 07:44 PM


OOOOOOOOOH SO SCARY. I'M LIGHTING CANDLE'S TONIGHT.NOT TAKING ANY CHANCES IF THE LIGHT'S GO OUT. AB.FAB. BEST WISHES, HELEN.
sandgrain
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11 posted 2006-10-31 08:45 PM


What a treat this one is!  It's a real keeper.


Rae

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12 posted 2006-10-31 09:14 PM


what a treat!
Earth Angel
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13 posted 2006-10-31 10:57 PM


Margherita ~

Ooo! The light going out in the elevator on Halloween must have been super scary! I'm relieved to learn that the rest of the electrical was in working order!!!!

I always appreciate your kind comments! Thank you!

Sending you love, a hug, and a Halloween kiss!

Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2006-10-31 10:59 PM


Chris ~

Yer sooo cute! Actually, you are as sweet as a Halloween treat! ~ Which I just ate too many of!!!

Happy Halloweeny hugs,

Linda

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15 posted 2006-10-31 11:03 PM


Sunshine ~

I bow before your radiance, Lady Shine! Thank you! That was very generous of you to say!

It pleases me that my Halloweeny poem pleased you!

Hugs 'n Halloween kisses,

Linda

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16 posted 2006-10-31 11:06 PM


Pebbles ~

My home is presently aglow with candles! I need all the added protection I can get! lol

It was good to hear from you, Helen!

Giving you a big Halloweeny hug 'n kiss (the chocolate kind! lol)

EA

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17 posted 2006-10-31 11:08 PM


Sandgrain ~

Hi, Rae! I'm glad that you liked it enough to save it! As a poet, I find that highly gratifying!

Happy Halloweeny hugs 'n chocolate kisses,

Linda

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2006-10-31 11:12 PM


passing shadows ~

Happy Halloween, Darlin' Dixie! Your reply is as sweet a treat as you are!

Happy Halloweeny hugs,
Linda


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19 posted 2006-11-01 03:21 PM



hee hee
you didn't scare me at all
Miss Linda angel

wait!
am I alone in here?
somebody pleeeeease come and get me...

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2006-11-01 10:52 PM


Lady Kate, you best be careful! The night has a thousand eyes ~ and teeth!

Fear not, m'lady! I shall surround you with the protective White Light of God!

Hugs 'n halloween kisses,
EA

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21 posted 2006-11-02 05:21 PM


Hah! I like that! It made me smile.  Good use of the ominous repetition, too.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2006-11-03 09:56 AM


Howdy, Pilgrim!

Glad this one tickled your fancy! Hope your Halloween was a happy one!


EA

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23 posted 2006-11-08 10:14 PM


Earth Angel,

   When I finally stole a minute to visit, what's this?  I find not one Earthy Angel poem on the front page.  This is disastrous and must be corrected immediately!  I hope things are as well as they can be.  Take care, Linda, and know I am thinking about you!  Incidently, jeepers, how did I miss this goodie near Halloween?  Glad I found it when browsing!  Very fun poem to read with a tinge of sadness hidden, but a fun poem to read.  

Hugsums (large sums of hugs to you)
miscellanea

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24 posted 2006-11-09 01:59 AM


What a surprise, Linda!  It just goes to show that angels can know the good and the bad and write them equally well!  Hmm?  Feels a bit chilly here all of a sudden.
Earth Angel
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25 posted 2006-11-09 03:37 PM


Misc Marvellous ~

Aren't you just the sweetest country gal! Thank you so much! My Light just got a bit brighter!

Good to hear from you! ~ for more ways than one! lol

Muchos huggos,

Linda

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2006-11-09 03:41 PM


Bunches of Honey ~

Hi, Honey!

In 'angel school' we had to learn about the Dark Side as well ~ and how avoid it!

Warm hug-o-love,
EA


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