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Open Poetry #39

When we're apart

jarrett
Member

since 2006-05-10

Posts 72
Ut, USA

0 posted 2006-10-29 09:43 PM

When we’re apart

Life is so confusing when you’re away
Where did you go? Why didn’t you stay?
So many questions linger within my heart
What shall I do now that we’re apart?

I still reach out my arms longingly
For you to come home to me!

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

1 posted 2006-10-30 07:34 AM

I like it... short and strong. Great!

[This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (10-30-2006 09:26 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-10-30 07:37 AM

awww...a very touching piece

I hope he comes back soon

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