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Open Poetry #39

Ravishing in Thought

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-10-29 08:57 PM

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Ravishing in Thought
13 March 2006

Could a word be found
the one that truly fits you
A stunner - a knockout
beauty ravishing in thought

Just to see your eyes smiling
to know on the inside your heart was true
Could it be beauty was a word
to reach out and describe you

As to a rose to a flower
the plush of a peach
Sweet to flavour in taste
this wonder in all your grace

The qualities that give
pleasure to the senses
Could a word be found
the one that truly fits you

"Out of Zion, the perfection of beauty, God hath shined."
Psalms 50: 2 KJV

© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

1 posted 2006-10-29 11:06 PM

ah tis a lucky woman to be viewed as such...nice write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2006-10-30 07:45 AM

sometimes people are so beautiful that we have to make up a word that isn't in the dictionary because there is no other word to fit them

yep

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

3 posted 2006-10-30 01:44 PM

she never thought she was beautiful, yet thinking of her, I wrote that.

and words can be like a smile, they can say so much.

a poet who cares

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