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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-29 01:24 AM



The Dream Will Go On

Difficult time
hard decision
you think everything is a dream
but you must decide
'cause the dream will go on

what started as a pleasant dream
turned to a nightmare
don't stop
don't loose your hope
face your fears
face your nightmare
so the dream will go on

you climb a mountain
but you are afraid of falling
now you reached the top
your fear is gone
and the dream will go on

don't stop dreaming
don't lose your hope
just face your fears
and your dream will go on

short..and simple, hope you like it.

© Copyright 2006 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2006-10-29 07:19 AM


I LIKE IT!
It is a distillation of important words of encouragement, for the troubled who can not be bothered or concentrate on lengthy, wordy exhortations of encouragement,

Well Done,
  David

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-10-29 08:32 AM


good advice
and so true!

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
3 posted 2006-10-29 05:33 PM


thanks for your replies i appreciate it.
see you..
Denis.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2006-10-30 04:29 PM


Like it...James
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