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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-10-29 01:55 AM



It Never Lessened The Pain

When you came into my life
It brightened with happiness
I would never have imagined
You would become heartless

You were the thoughtful kind
One that was caring and true
Never could I have perceived
The inconsideration from you

Although I had been noticing
A few subtle changes in you
Seems a dead end situation
The one which you led me to

Love remains no matter what
I recall you saying this to me
There was no doubt however
I was being ignored purposely

After I accepted your apology
Silence was happening again
Yet I loved you without doubt
But it never lessened the pain

Hope ©2006
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-10-29 02:30 AM


Wonderful -- I understand it on levels that need no words.

Thank you.
a

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2006-10-29 07:10 AM


There is such a tyranny in the agony of your irony. What a brutal blow is that of a betrayed or an abandoned love.  You have expressed it well.

David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-10-29 08:34 AM


heartless...yeah that's a good word for him

you are so much better than that, my friend

jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
Posts 72
Ut, USA
4 posted 2006-10-29 09:34 PM


This is amazing.. and so true.
Thanks
Tricia

Becky Mangrum
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since 2006-10-18
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5 posted 2006-10-30 06:34 PM


So sad but i can relate to your feelings on this.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2006-10-30 06:41 PM


Another excellent write Hope.
I hope it isn't true.
Heart hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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