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Open Poetry #39

Be With You

gypsyheartx
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since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

0 posted 2006-10-28 02:56 PM

Hold me closer when you go,
So our ties can be felt through skin aglow
Wishes;
I still dream even though
Your memory has been caught in the undertoe.
Could hollow hope really make this true?
For I'd go to hell just to be with you.

~Miranda~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-10-28 03:55 PM

Miranda,
Strong write, enjoyed the read.

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

2 posted 2006-10-28 04:36 PM

Thank you

, glad you liked.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-10-28 05:29 PM

enjoyed this!

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

4 posted 2006-10-28 05:43 PM

thank you very much, i'm glad.

deval
Junior Member

since 2007-05-06

Posts 16

5 posted 2007-05-10 01:20 AM

ah ! it's very nice
you have converts your feeling into words so nicely.
few words but deep emotions

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