Open Poetry #39 |
Thought Darkness ...inspired |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thought Darkness ...inspired Deep inside those thoughts are hidden in darkness where only the past lies with nothing left but the twinning of a once cared for dream. Today the cold penetrates, the memories replaced by steel, where the chase never ends and one pays the price of another. Walking the deadprints, feeling more than one should, squeezed by the thought darkness into a world of the hunted and into the essence of those tomorrows. M inspired by a phrase by Deep_Inside "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, You just keep getting better and better. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Sy, must be because I am so tired... the less thinking I do, the better M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is kinda sad M hope you are doing okay |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This deserves to be seen and read 'cuz it is good! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Wow this is good, and not just because i might have had something to do with the inspration. It's like you went back and read some of my old pices. can't wait to read more, thanks |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
This gave me goosebump's. Thankyou. |
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