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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I moved on to november a few days ahead of time it is always easier this way avoiding the crowd or the line there is another picture too on the table by the rocking chair her eyes are like yours a little but perhaps more sincere and her hair covers her shoulder too and her lips suggest things everyone knows I enjoy hearing even if it is not true most of the time no she didn't send the photo to me and I wasn't the photographer it just came in the frame from target for ninety nine cents and a coupon but at least the woman is real this time _______________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the ending with a twist..feels like an ouch. Have plenty of band-aides round here somewhere..... hugs, big guy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah, layers of selves upon shelves... bittersweet for Friday's coffee... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Solitude, very intensely rendered! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, nope..just did some interior redecoration..it inspired ___________ ms sun, thanks lady friend _________ ms mar, thank you for the tiptoe visit |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"and her lips suggest things everyone knows I enjoy hearing even if it is not true most of the time" what a great line, DS so now that you have me on the table?  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite, always knew you were "table stuff" thanks for the eyes |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and her lips suggest things everyone knows I enjoy hearing even if it is not true most of the time" you know those words are always true Stranger is this the womman that works at chuey's? the craz'd blond? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...I had some things I enjoyed hearing, even though they weren't true...when the truth arrives it stings...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..it is just some redecoration...wink ___________ james, thanks amigo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...this makes me want to hug you for some reason....maybe it's the light.  |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
would love to be the one saying those things that turn you on... another great write, Lord Dark... mmmmmmmm... Moonkist Freedom Now |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have one of those frames...sitting there, needs a bit of dusting though. (it's as real as it gets)  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, just smile for me, thanks little neighbor _______________ ms moon, what you are saying is a blessing, thank you for the whispers ________________ ms MMs, I put a picture of the black witch in mine..she is my real metal, thanks ms |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
lol, ok you will get your photo  My spirit will rise |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
~ smiles |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms groves, no no..not target again..thanks for the read ______________ ms az, touch, you are it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
If it's possible to move on to November, can I just skip Christmas? |
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