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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2006-09-02 05:15 AM

Upon th’ thought do silent spirits hide
Following the course of memories;
I hath seen a dying star still full of life,
Trusting only my vision but dost it lie?
Nightly, from their beds do they awake --
In the midst of knowing they never woke
It was in our lazy rotation we visioned it so,
Nothing is of reason,Motionlessly thoughts do linger,
Shall I confess my thoughts of late?
Ah, ‘tis like none other yet reasonless --
Thou art more than dying stars
thou art th’ fountain of my mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-09-02 11:04 AM

"Thou art more than dying stars
thou art th’ fountain of my mind."

~ The perfect closing to another fine poem from your illustrious pen!

It's been awhile! Good to read you again, Lee!

Linda

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2006-09-02 10:47 PM

Beautifully said.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2006-09-02 11:40 PM

This is lovely.

aziza

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

4 posted 2006-09-03 03:04 AM

Where life pours forth
the fountains of mind
and opened armed thought...

lovely, Red

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2006-09-03 02:29 PM

Just beautiful as usual, thanks for a smooth, Sunday read.

Dublin Boy
Member

since 2006-08-26

Posts 102
UK

6 posted 2006-09-03 03:54 PM

Very nicely structured and beautifully phrased--a joy to read.
Cheers,
Bill

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2006-09-03 04:13 PM

We can sometimes reason away the truth so trust the vision and the fountain of your mind - my penny's worth.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2006-09-22 11:25 AM

It was in our lazy rotation we visioned it so,
Nothing is of reason,Motionlessly thoughts do linger,
Shall I confess my thoughts of late?
Ah, ‘tis like none other yet reasonless --

I like this very much! *S*

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