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spring mountain
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spring mountain |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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subtle breezes tickled the sun from his sleep this morning told him keep it cool don’t you know autumn’s on its way spring mountain horses chuffed shook their heads raised their heels politely bemused gusty promises enticed us paiute shaman nodded watched you show me shadows and skies on the naked side of tumbleweed white shirt sleeves rolled up as if for business you pulled the sun down into his bed told him shhh… don’t disturb waiting for autumn |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lady, I think this is one of my favorites of yours. Wonderful write!  ....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you dear jo hugs Kate |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
show me shadows and skies on the naked side of tumbleweed ~*~ your craft is glowing.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, I used to take a morning journey down spring mountain road, chasing the night from the sagebrush with a machinegun spotlight...can see it here..enjoyed it ms |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welp Sunshine picked my favorite part LOL |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Autumn is arriving here now Kate, but your poem takes me back to the mountains, to home....and I can see the beautiful colours waiting there to greet me. mmmmm...dear Lady, this is truly one of my favorites of yours, this imagery is outstanding. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Several fine lines struck me, but I have to admit, I couldn't pick just one favorite. Awesome flows to this delight. TD shhhh  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James thank you for shining on me dear Sunshine Stranger darlin’ do you look anything like a shaman? the spring mountain horses and I thank you LOL thank you Dixie thank you gentle Donna this is a wonderful time of year in the desert achingly beautiful sings to me glad it bought you a ticket home for a minute thank you for your kind comment TD shhhh |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful! Went diving for a moment and came up with this jewel. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad this came back up awesome write! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for finding it and for your comment Margherita thank you dear Dixie |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
The Lady...Enjoyed very much. Waiting for Autumn...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How did I miss this gem? As usual, I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am still waiting too Paul I can see it peeping ‘round the corner well thank you Loper I appreciate your comment as usual |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Spring Mountain" ~ with a title like that, I was certain to be drawn in! ~ and of course, by the author of that title!  There is something extremely special about your writing. It's magical! Loving hug of appreciation, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Into my library this gem floats !! |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
when i was at a function the medicine man was taking his stick and doing something i asked what he was doing he said his anti rain dance i laughed and said it is going to rain because he wishes it to then it started to rain then i said there will be a clearing and the clouds opened into a circle right above the pow wow i said see then the cloud moved in to fill the whole sky and rain was every where i told him it is all about faith. and your relationship with the creator. this was a great write my friend love the papa i see what i write and write what i see |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Wow, this piece is really nice. Lovely images. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Linda Angel for your kind words loving hug of appreciation for you thank you Nightshade thank you for your story and your comment William thank you Steve |
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