Open Poetry #39 |
Lonesome, Sad and Blue |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Just another ancient pout, found... A leaf from a tree...long ago uprooted. I'm lonesome... and I don't mean I'm just alone. I'm so lonesome. I'm blue clean to the bone. It's like a ... My hearts been walked on, no whiskey, no pills, my dog growls at me, laid off at the mill, Mama just died, empty inside, low down kind of lonesome. I'm so sad... Yeah, I'm lonesome and I'm sad. I don't know what to do so I won't feel so bad. It's like a... My baby just left me, dog just died, eviction notice, can't have nothing fried, everythings wrong, Hank Williams song, one car funeral kind of sad. Lord, I'm blue. I'm lonesome, sad and blue. I wish I knew what in the world I'm gonna do. It's like a... Bullet to the brain, ball and chain, broken winged bluebird out in the rain, guitar's pawned, cuss the dawn, so morose almost comatose, gold gilded overdose lonesome, sad, blue. |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
intersting form with long arms good thoughts well done love the papa i see what i write and write what i see |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Uriah, Why thats so far down, there is no place left but up. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is the saddest country song I've ever heard! You sing it so well...LOL..much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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