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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-10-22 04:05 PM



Below the surface
of me, an
abstruse nature rests.
Dormant it lays
upon golden whispers,
ready to be
revealed and uttered
in shadowed midnight.
Like a returning
echo from eras
long forgotten, it
shines, waiting to
captivate again, sweet
blissful souls, with
rich dark secrets.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-10-22 04:22 PM


reminds me of one of those gourmet chocolates

you are even sweeter though

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2006-10-22 04:57 PM


Secrets are captivating and so are your words !

Love,
Margherita  

The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-10-22 11:34 PM



ah to be there at
shadowed midnight

your golden whispers are lovely
Goldenrose


bslicker
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4 posted 2006-10-23 04:20 AM


One of your best I have read.
But I am trying to turn whispers in words that can be heard. Well done

Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2006-10-23 08:30 AM


Yes there is treasure there, waiting to be found, a chest full of golden coins, love coins of gold.

Like a returning
echo from eras
long forgotten, it
shines, waiting to
captivate again...these were my favorite lines!

lightkeeper
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pluto
6 posted 2006-10-24 05:44 PM


x phil x

The depth of your soul is as deep and wide as the oceans ..... many will spend a lifetime seeking such treasures, but rare are the seekers to which these oceans reveal their bounties .

        Love Bernadette xxx

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2006-10-24 05:58 PM


Oh, how intriguing...

Still water runs deep! ~ and that can be a very good thing!


Linda

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Canada eh.
8 posted 2006-10-24 06:59 PM


Oooh!  Now this one intrigues me!
Most certainly enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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