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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2006-10-22 03:43 AM



Every time that horrible poison touches your lips
a salty droplet mixed with mascera streams down my face.
I do not understand all your broken promises,
and I cannot understand your need for that horrible substance.
Everytime you promise it won't happen again,
and everytime I end up torn up inside and depressed.
Why can you not fill yourself with God's love and glory,
instead of killing marriage with this crap?
My love for you, dear brother,
is as great as my anger is this night.

Please Lord,
let him walk away from temptation
and let him understand that he does not need it.
Help my dear brother.
Help him.
Amen.

© Copyright 2006 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2006-10-22 04:23 PM


Dear Laura, this is very heartfelt and intense. Despair is felt and I am sure God hears and answers your prayer.

Love,
Margherita

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