When You Knocked the Door to Say "I'm Sorry"

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Open Poetry #39

When You Knocked the Door to Say "I'm Sorry"

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-21 10:54 PM

Thanks all, as always..it might be boring to always read the same lines, but know that they come deep from my heart.
Well Here we go,

When You Knocked the Door to Say "I'm Sorry"

This is a dream
i had one night
i was really tired
and fell asleep so fast
yet the dream ended so quick

i was at home
talking to a friend
and then
the door knocked

i ran and opened
it was you
i tried but just couldn't believe it

you smiled
and kissed me
like nothing had ever happened

while i just couldn't understand
why did you come?
why did you smile?
what happened to all that sadness?

and then i understood
yes, my love, i understood
you wanted forgiveness
but you didn't have the courage
to ask for it

you entered my house
and then you spoke
you finally said "I'm Sorry"

i answered
that i had forgiven you
a long time ago
we kissed on that room
and everything was as it used to be

and then
the dream ended
with that kiss
still in my memories

unfortunately
you didn't come that day
you didn't ask for forgiveness
and i'm still waiting
in the same house
trying to believe
that you will come
only when you've realized
that i already forgave you
a long,long time ago

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2006-10-22 04:15 PM

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-10-22 04:18 PM

Good to read your work, sometimes that is how
it comes out...the wash isn't always the way
we want it, but life is life....

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

3 posted 2006-10-22 05:24 PM

Thanks for your warm replies..
thanks a lot

Denis.

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