Open Poetry #39 |
Discovery |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Discovery We greet our deepest wishes in our dreams Awake, or sleeping, such desire deems Silencing my searching mind with ease Your mouth upon my mouth in coalesce Sigh blown, the mist evaporates from sight Exploring limpid pools intrepid light The innocence of love returns to call A deeper presence beckons us to fall Symmetrical the motion of your touch To follow trails my fingers tell tale brush Allowing every moments rhythmic voice Sensations found in sudden innate choice A world inside kept secret far from view Delights our eyes and in our hearts renew Such exploration sought in passions arms Perpetual allure conspires hidden charms Afterglow of fire let low, asleep in happy rain Upon the beating heart resounding once again Familiarity once but a passing glance Has brought divine this epic, sweet romance Copyright Kkh 10/21/06 |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sounds like a very nice discovery.You wrote this so beautifully. As always! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"We greet our deepest wishes in our dreams" indeed we do TD this poem speaks romance "asleep in happy rain" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for whatever reason, I thought of those Glade Wisps when I read this heck if I know why that came to my mind, but it's a good write! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My dreams have been on the waning side for months now, or perhaps I just have not noticed them? They can be a gift or a curse, depending on what we see... May your own always be a gift to you...for you deserve those moments. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your talent never fails to impress me, dear TD! Love, Margherita |
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