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Open Poetry #39

Cast in Flour

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

0 posted 2006-10-20 10:54 PM

Words are cast in flour,
Sifting within the mind as
dust to the clouds

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (10-22-2006 06:35 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2006-10-20 10:55 PM

ooooooooo I like!

SarBear
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since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2006-10-20 11:09 PM

I really like this. Beautiful.

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-10-21 12:18 PM

ohhh misc! This is perfect!

Sandra

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-10-21 01:15 AM

So many of the words that you cast upon the page are indelible in my mind. ~ even your sifting flour thoughts stay with me.

Sleep well, this night, Sweet Cathy!

Linda

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

5 posted 2006-10-21 04:41 AM

Love the analogy, sis.....love you, too!....jo

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-10-22 12:22 PM

yes!
I like it
very unique...

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