Open Poetry #39 |
Still Here |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
You call. Days go by. I'm still here but I don't know why. You stop in. We chat about the weather. You make plans for us getting together. I half smile. The edges are rough. Honestly it's just too much and not worth enough. You call. Days go by. Yeah, I'm still here but I don't know why. |
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fmlbarebackrider2001 Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 138West Texas, United States |
Oh! I know how that feels. Hate it. Nicely worded! Know yourself before you try to know someone else. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Still here and don't know why. Sure relate to that on a number of levels, not necessarily referring to a person. Why do we do the things we do?! For instance, sometimes I wonder why I just continue in my 'time rut...' Take care, Dixie. Good to read you again... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh I know this feeling...not even waiting for the call just sitting right next to each other and theres no longer a connection |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
"I half smile. The edges are rough. Honestly it's just too much and not worth enough" Boy, does that say it perfectly, or what? You are such a joy to read. You keep hitting my heart. How can you do that? Without fail, you keep hitting my heart. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Some habits are hard to kick! But I think you are doing better than most could in your situation. You are stronger than you give yourself credit for! I always feel your writes. Take care, Darlin' Dixie!! Linda |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"I half smile. The edges are rough. Honestly it's just too much and not worth enough." I certainly can relate to this. Well said, Dixie! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Have to agree with Linda. But...it's good to see you are still here. *hugs*...jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hello ladies! thanks for the replies...I'm so glad you enjoyed and could relate |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I half smile. The edges are rough" yup I can relate too Dixie and the half smile half hurts doesn't it... |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
yes, you're still here love ya Christopher a poet who cares |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Touching Dixie !!! I have not even had a call and I am still hear Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very poignant lines, dear Dixie. How often we wonder "Why?" ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Yes, been there before...Just waiting...I hate waiting...Great write. "My soul is adrift in oceans of madness |
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sweetberry Member
since 2006-03-29
Posts 125 |
I loved it!!! These very words weighing heavy on my heart at this exact moment... Thanx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyone |
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