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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-11-03 02:21 PM



it's good to walk in a drizzle,
for the softness of rain
falls gently upon wet cheeks
without judgements
or conditions

let the sun shine some other day
grey epitomizes the day
and suits the mood,
no need to filter out
bright spots
or conceal
the real

rain walking
suits me
today


the reality...it is pouring here

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-03 02:24 PM


"Just a walkin' in the rain
feelin' kind of blue ..."
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2006-11-03 02:25 PM


thanks
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3 posted 2006-11-03 02:38 PM


Send it down here, Kacy...I'll dig out my umbrella.  
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4 posted 2006-11-03 02:43 PM


If ever again it makes it down there, for a visit, I would enjoy walking in a drizzle with you, lady Martie!
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5 posted 2006-11-03 03:38 PM


We could have a parade of Pipsters walking
in the drizzle...  Whatcha think?  Seriously,
I agree, the light drizzle certainly can
be rather soothing.

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6 posted 2006-11-03 04:23 PM


"rain
falls gently upon wet cheeks
without judgements
or conditions"

That it does, Kacy, that it does. and we could all learn from that.  Happy rain walking!

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7 posted 2006-11-03 05:57 PM


This is deceptively simple.  I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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8 posted 2006-11-03 06:56 PM




your reality is
my fantasy Kacy

thank you for the lovely rain walk

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9 posted 2006-11-03 10:21 PM


it sure can be relaxing, yes
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10 posted 2006-11-04 06:12 AM


For me this just tells it like it is. Enjoyed!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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11 posted 2006-11-04 09:02 AM



Accepting things
for what they are...

that's our Kacy!




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with you
12 posted 2006-11-04 12:18 PM


really liked this, I'm getting some rain myself and sure am enjoying it!
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13 posted 2006-11-05 08:17 PM


i love the rain....and this poem.
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14 posted 2006-11-05 09:44 PM


As the old song goes: "rainy days and Mondays ...". Sometimes ya just gotta wallow in it for a bit huh? Hope all is well and you're weathering the storms. Good to see ya again Kacy

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

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