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Serenity and the Wind
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Serenity and the Wind |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Serenity and the Wind Your green and blue is clean like breathing something good to eat I pull you in and let you out hungry and alive within your art And such a song of howl you touch my wind chimes listen see the leaves all scatter when you come near my skin my ears my heart my very only love in air How I’ve missed this ion rush I didn’t know your absence until I felt you present isn’t that strange like life a rage of insanity can bring the light and everything in scatter run comes down at last to that or this a tremble humble lift like I’ve begun some new adventure screaming wild born new and red Don’t leave me yet the transformation won’t be complete until I fly and I’m not ready yet to die I must first live it all and swirl this touching breathing battle with the surface to find the stars resort within my very own majesty’s imperfect perfect |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, you do the wind so well |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SO beautiful dear Martie... I sit here shaking my head...how does she do it.. time after time...You are amazing!! Autumnal hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
well sis give me a plane over a car train or bus truck etc. any day i love to be in the air except for the small planes where i have to be in front or i get sick i used to co-pilot my father's plane and i was clos to God great write keep doing well love your brother papa i see what i write and write what i see |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done Party Martie...you paint such colorful art...and in a language that is so unique and priceless... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm always in awe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a rage of insanity can bring the light and everything in scatter run comes down at last to that or this a tremble humble lift like I’ve begun some new adventure screaming wild born new and red ~*~ As colorful as anything that can wind along in the wind... and it begs to be felt. Until one stands in this, it is all imagination... but I'm grateful you can find the right words.  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, Is it me or do I see just a hint of Serenity? Nicely done...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry...yes you do! I'm so glad you saw it... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I pull you in and let you out hungry and alive within your art" it breathes Martie exquisite piece of work |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie, I read this earlier today and just came back to read it again and save it this time. Very special poem here...almost cried, it is so tender and beautiful. *hugs*...jo |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, Martie. I felt as if I was floating on that wind... Wooooooo, WOOOOOOOOOO! I was blown from stem to stern and from pillar to post! Good write. John xo Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You have a beautiful way with the wind Martie...hugs lady. Much enjoyed this. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I must put "Santa Ana" winds on my list of things to experience before I die... and a real life sweet Marite hug.  Your opening stanza got my attention bigtime: "Your green and blue is clean like breathing something good to eat I pull you in and let you out hungry and alive within your art" Do you see colors associated with people too? (It's okay to talk to me about it--I'm crazy yanno. )love you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I can always count on you to see the beauty in this world of choas and give us all a safe place to land to feel that serenity. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great!!! Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Martie, I absolutely agree that it's so strange how sometimes insanity can bring out the best in life, and it's what encourages the little fledglings we are to learn to fly and let our hearts beacon to the high heavens! (angel friendship hugs) Whether your metamorphosis has even come close to completion or not, you are our special dearest flower girl friend that dances across these robin egg blue pages like a butterfly, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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