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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-10-18 10:37 AM


jaunty town has new shoes
with the crisco summer gone
grooves wiggle their toes
under the rain sandals

you brought me hello songs
in your pale skin basket
we made laughter from them
quietly stirring the water

til it was the thick saliva
of left over kisses
and you stole some too
carried them on your shoulder

as you hurried back to the rain
wearing your favorite umbrella
and a handful of windy roses
hidden in cigar box stationary

that waited on the buss of morning


______________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-18-2006 12:55 PM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-10-18 11:38 AM


DS  That is what it feels like..."making laughter".  I love what the Santa Ana winds do to the inside of me.  
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-10-18 12:55 PM


ms martie, thanks little neighbor, for the wave
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-10-18 01:00 PM


"you brought me hello songs"

...and this is what you bring to us with each write.

Hello DS!

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
4 posted 2006-10-18 01:31 PM


Lady E, thank you for the magic of your touch.
seraphin
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Michigan
5 posted 2006-10-18 02:36 PM


You do know that I never tire of reading your thoughts, don't you?

I've not left a word for a while, so just to let you know I've not left my post...I remain your number 1 fan.

Sandra

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-10-18 03:06 PM


ms sandra, you are a treat to my eyes too, thanks lady friend
The Lady
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-10-18 06:16 PM



Stranger
I long for another rainy night
and morning...

nice stuff

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-10-18 07:01 PM


ladyone, there is always another for the eyes of your mind, thank you ladyone
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