Open Poetry #39 |
Total Ellipse Of The Mind |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
... Sometimes my thoughts are incomplete ... ... in all I try to say or do ... ... so I fill in the dead space ... ... with an ellipse or two ... ... knowing that they infuriate some ... ... but caring not a twit ... ... omission of a word or phrase necessary ... ... for a complete syntactical construction ... ... but not necessary for understanding ... ... a poem in total destruction ... ... I love ellipses .... yes I do ... ... so you are just stuck with it ... ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis.......Me too!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge! My sides hurt from laughing now! There is not one post of mine...or reply, without ellipses! Why? Because I love them.....!! You are tooooo much! Hugs and laughs, Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Girls ... I can only say Enchantress ... you aren't getting off that easily !! It's ALL YOUR FAULT !!!!!! ...Huglets*... ~*..M..a..r..g..e..*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Marge...I too...often use ellipses...to separate my thoughts...I'm very partial to them...as you can see. believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yer a naughty lil girl... laughing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, "stuck with it." I don't mind a bit. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Scorpio~ I've been told that they are contagious ! Ya' think ? Karen~ I try !! (even successfully sometimes) Seymour~ Sweetie .. atta boy ! *Huglets* ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
... ::smiles:: |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, Marge. I, too, am an unabashed, unapologetic and prolific user of ellipses... ...In fact, I love them. ...AND, they are VERY useful when you DON'T want to finish a thought...for whatever reason... ...See what I mean...? Very funny... John xo Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marge, I absolutely LOVE the title. And yes, I understand your position. I wish I could talk with those three little dots. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Far too often I find myself using them... to make various points...in place of other punctuation... to indicate unfinished sentences... or? I love your poem concerning them...... Rae |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what the heck is an ellipse... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cute title! Cute poem! Cute you... I'm love ellipses! I'm a bit like Picasso in that I learn the rules and love to break them! Loves 'n hugs, EO |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Ellipses can be very constructive.....you go Marge!! sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... You've gotta know I love this!! *S* In writing my legal memos, I use ellipses to indicate that I've left out part of what I'm quoting... I sorta figure that's descriptive of my mind and poems - something's missing! LOL |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
...fantastic, utterly... ...nuff said |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) And I certainly don't mind you using them, as I too believe ellipses speak volumes in literature, as to me it is representative of an individual really feeling the moment, reflecting in a sensitive demeanor, and I believe there's so much we fail to feel in life if we only go by commas and periods! (smiles) I enjoyed this, dear friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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