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Martie

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0 posted 2006-10-17 12:11 PM

Under the Blanket so Something

In the quiet morning before dawn
all comfort drawn in warm
a blanket can give you things
most soft arm

Slip in here my sweet dark place
embrace the soft of curl
a canopy of safe skin touch
lit by dream half gone

A blessing breathes
a snore to light
through the door can peek
into the changing almost here
of liquid eyes dream keep

The coming of the birds sing in
the window half a crack
naked the stretch of feet my heart
gives love a rub attack

And all in time that has no place
is sweetest breakfast muffin
a feast of soul in waking thus
that starts the day so something

The Lady
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The Southwest

1 posted 2006-10-17 12:21 PM

"so something"

perfect Martie...

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2006-10-17 07:43 AM

a blessing this morning
you are

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-10-17 08:57 AM

Morning is a sacred space.
Loved this.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-10-17 09:23 AM

A most beautiful way to awaken...
Lovely this...lovely you.
Hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-10-17 09:34 PM

Ah, and sentimentality seeps...
but not a sense of trite herein....

spread some of that wondrous dust,
poet....that I might learn even more....

of style, and form,
and line breaks...

and

Magic!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-10-17 11:54 PM

"a feast of soul in waking thus" ~ Indeed it is, Sweet Poetess! ... and your scribed it 'purrr'fectly!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Goodknight
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Ohio, USA

7 posted 2006-10-18 12:19 PM

you do it so very well dear Martie and this is proff of that - loved this - paul

Honeybunch
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South Africa

8 posted 2006-10-18 04:12 AM

You awake so beautifully, Martie. I want some of your "so something".

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2006-10-19 12:53 PM

that starts the day so something
I sort of love it when I think you are "lost for words."

So something is good!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

10 posted 2006-10-20 09:20 AM

ms martie
I enjoyed the suggestion of this
closet door open feeling

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2006-10-20 09:28 AM

Martie
Every morning you tickle me awake.

suthern

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Louisiana

12 posted 2006-10-24 12:48 PM

a feast of soul in waking thus

It certainly sounds like the way to start the day! *S* Beautiful write! *S*

Ratleader

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13 posted 2006-10-24 02:48 PM

Delicious....yes, that's the word I've been searching for, delicious.

Under the blanket, so.....delicious.

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