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Break The Broken
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Break The Broken |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Why'd you go and break what's already broken? Why'd you go and fake what was spoken? With nothing more to deplete, I guess I relinquish defeat. I don't think you have a clue, Of what you'd like to do. Why'd you go and break what's already broken? Why'd you go and fake what was spoken? Crouched over you were not there, See the bleeding heart perched in dispair. Once had all the happy things, Sit back and remember how it now stings. Why'd you go and break what's already broken? Why'd you go and fake what was spoken? Your face is burned inside my brain, A stamp that flows through my vein. You don't see me anymore it seems, With one action lost all the dreams. Why'd you go and break what's already broken? Why'd you go and fake what was spoken? Why'd you go and break what's already broken? Why'd you go and fake what was spoken? Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I like the rhythm of this Kyle the repeated lines the depth of emotion... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Kyle, as always. Hugs Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you brought back a memory or two with this one |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is always so much passion expressed through your poetry, Hot Flakes! I suppose that means yer hot sctuff!   EA |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I too like the rhythm of this poem! |
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