:( Don't Let Them Get Me :(

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Open Poetry #39

:( Don't Let Them Get Me :(

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2006-10-13 02:04 AM

Thankyou to everyone that replies to my poems it means heaps.. Thanx again

I can’t remember asking you for help
But I can remember the hurt that I felt
You came from nowhere,
All of a sudden I felt brave and at that instance I realised you were there

You led me forward from the darkest of light
And promised me a future, happy and bright
You’ve healed me and I give thanks
But now all the work you did is swept under the bank

You made me realise that I was real
And to ignore the hatred that I feel
How have I become so numb?
Why is the pain making me feel dumb?

I feel so tired and I’ve lost my pride
The smile that once shone so bright, is dull and bleak and lost inside
I hadn’t cried for weeks until now
As the tears stream down my face as I ask god how?

I’ve fallen down onto the ground
The rain washes my body, not making a sound
Hatred begins to fill my head
As I slowly begin to wish I was dead

Please let me be healed once more
Give me the courage that I need to answer a knock at the door
Let me awake to a world that truly exists
Let me live life the way I want and then maybe god won’t be able to resist.

Don’t let the monsters inside my head get me
Please just let me be
Please God, don’t let them get me!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-10-13 07:07 AM

I know this feeling

you wrote of it well

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2006-10-13 03:57 PM

I thought this was well-thought-out. Sometimes all it takes is company to help us handle the world.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

3 posted 2006-10-13 04:29 PM

I’ve fallen down onto the ground
The rain washes my body, not making a sound
Hatred begins to fill my head
As I slowly begin to wish I was dead

I know this feeling too.

You did such a wonderful job! I truly enjoyed this! (Read it three times already!)

~Kira

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