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Dublin Boy
Member

since 2006-08-26

Posts 102
UK

0 posted 2006-09-05 03:33 PM

Someday
I'll fashion dreams out of cobwebs,
tame a storm's temper tantrums,
lasso a passing comet
and pen a poem which shouts
all the languages of the universe.
I'll ride the ocean swells,
peer over the edge of Creation
and listen to an angel cry.
I will do all of those things--
someday.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-09-05 04:16 PM

Absolutely beautiful writing!
I felt I was swept up into a dream
with your wonderful imagery.

Once again I say, Welcome to Passions!!
Hugs~Nancy

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2006-09-05 05:14 PM

Yes, Bill, I believe you will - we all will "someday". Remember - what the mind can perceive, it can achieve. Enjoyed your words!

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

3 posted 2006-09-05 05:36 PM

Good poem- like they say if we don't aim big, we'll surely not get to where we'd like to get-do and accomplish anywhere close to what we want to achieve.
Aim Tall-Stand Tall,and Apologize-NOT AT ALL!

Enjoyed your expression of Lofty Ambitions,

David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2006-09-05 05:41 PM

Dublin Boy
Well here is mud in your eye. LOL

Dublin Boy
Member

since 2006-08-26

Posts 102
UK

5 posted 2006-09-05 06:36 PM

Thanks, everyone, for responding favourably to this one. I very much appreciate your comments.
Regards,
Bill

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

6 posted 2006-09-05 11:26 PM

"Fashion dreams out of cobwebs"

That is one wonderful line, followed by many more. This is positively dreamy!!

Sandra

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-09-06 12:24 PM

beautifully done Bill...

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

8 posted 2006-09-06 12:33 PM

Everything begins with a thought. I loved this little kaleidoscope of big imaginings. Who know?

~ Klassy

Dublin Boy
Member

since 2006-08-26

Posts 102
UK

9 posted 2006-09-06 10:40 AM

Thank you, Seraphin, Lady and Klassy for your kind comments. Maybe we'll all achieve greatness someday--as Klassy says, who knows?

Cheers,
Bill

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2006-09-08 07:32 PM

Create your world and live in it...James

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2006-09-09 05:00 PM

This is such a hopeful poem. I
enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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