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Day Dream |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
as always, thanks to all those who have been reading my poems and commenting so warmly about them. Here we go, Day Dream strange places appeared in front of me i'm no longer awake but not asleep either i've been moved somewhere in a very strange place i was at home, sitting in the kitchen very tired and then everything began to change strange words and sounds reach my ears like a very strange dream how is it that i'm dreaming if i'm not in bed? i look all around looking for you you are not here seems that dreams about you are only at night i try to focus i try to see if i can get out of there strange memories twisted versions of my past begin flashing and passing in front of me suddenly i wake up i am still sitting in that kitchen it is still daylight strange sensation incredible reaction of my mind to move my mind from one place to another finally i realized that my little trip was nothing but a day dream and i assure you i didn't like it that confusion those strange images the day dream didn't let me rest didn't let me dream it only showed me another kind of fantasies another kind of dreams another universe with many, many worlds that only a day dream can show you. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
This is a very nice work. The things daydreams can bring to you can be pretty amazing. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
thanks steve..for your comment. I'm glad you liked it. i'm passin through a very hard moment, so any warm comments help me to keep going. Denis. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Very nice read. I enjoyed it and hope that times get better for you. Hang in there and thank you for sharing your writing. aziza |
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