A Little Pieces O My Heart

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2006-10-12 05:50 PM

A little pieces we make
A little way we take
A little pieces of my heart
lyning on the floor
We have been lovers
We have been friends
There is a little way
to follow your heart
I know
this love has ended
We have been trying harder
to fix our pieces
of our hearts together
But eachtime we try
We fall apart
Love takes time
to heart
Can you see
there is broken heart here
How many times
we have been through this
But
It seems
we won't be friends anymore
You say It is over between us
My heart has been broken
And there is isn't any words
to be spoken
Because our love has ended
And I know
We can come back again
We will fix our hearts again
We will find ourselves in love
over again

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-10-12 06:14 PM

Very nicely written vandana..I enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-10-12 08:23 PM

LovelyVanDana~
Our hearts go through so many breaks ... it's often hard to believe they can be healed ... but ... it is possible for it to be mended ... sometimes by the one who broke it ... and sometimes by someone new, who not only 'mends' it ... but makes it even better than before~

This aches, sweetie ... I pray you a mended heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-10-12 09:59 PM

well done!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-10-12 10:05 PM

Vandana,

You continue to grow with your writing. We have missed you, and it is our joy to see your name again!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-10-13 07:54 PM

I've thought these thoughts...
we can only do our part...
James

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2006-10-14 10:23 PM

The solutions to love always seem to be puzzling, I think. I wish you great happiness, vandana. It will come... You have a beautiful heart and others can't help but know this.

I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope to see more of your writing when I am able to return.

miscellanea

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2006-10-22 10:17 PM

(angel comfort hugs) Oh Vandana, my heart goes out to you ever so much, as I miss talking to you and your gorgeous poetry, and I continue to tear up and smile at how you've grown and matured as a writer and the wonderful person you are, and I have deepest faith your heart knows the answer and can let the love prevail and shine! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

8 posted 2006-10-22 10:28 PM

Wish I had written this... says so much I have. I love this but sorry about your pain.

Sincerely,
Sauni

Sauni:)
To meet everything and everyone through stillness instead of mental noise is the greatest gift you can offer to the universe.

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