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passing shadows
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0 posted 2006-10-10 11:44 PM

It's not just anywhere that I can find you.
It's not just any time of day that I can see.
It's only through certain cracks in mind
and when the light is on at a certain degree

because now you are just a memory.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-10-10 11:48 PM

painful
and excellent
Dixie...

themute
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

2 posted 2006-10-10 11:52 PM

Quite hopfully perstistant and meloncholic in its reminiscence. Much loved

I am the two-toed wanderer

CraigM
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since 2006-10-05

Posts 13

3 posted 2006-10-11 08:06 AM

Short an powerful. That really hit me. I loved it thanks.

Craig

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2006-10-11 02:45 PM

Dixie...I know that place of cracks and memory...I see it gracefully within your words.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-10-11 11:56 PM

thank you each

I'm honored by your replies

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2006-10-12 05:28 PM

Enjoyed...nice flow of thoughts...
When memories start coming into my mind, of someone I really cared for, I find myself thinking so many different thoughts ...
"I'm thinking of you now...will my thoughts be happy or sad...good or bad...and then I find myself thinking...I don't want you back, because I know that things will have to be different, with me and with you, for our relationship to exist not only in my heart but in reality"..James

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

7 posted 2006-10-12 05:47 PM

good read

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

8 posted 2006-10-14 03:16 AM

Again, you have left me with a smile -- yes, it is a bit bittersweet. But, the memories can be so beautiful and the experiences make us the people we are now. I think you write with the experience of memories -- if that makes sense?

aziza

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

9 posted 2006-10-14 03:18 AM

Liked this in its brevity...so much said.

[This message has been edited by iliana (10-14-2006 06:32 AM).]

icebox
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in the shadows

10 posted 2006-10-14 05:03 AM

Well and clearly said!

passing shadows
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11 posted 2006-10-14 10:24 AM

thanks all

I'm glad you liked!

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