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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps a confusing morning of mexican food momentary the red and green kind that makes your mouth cry and smile too wanting more on and in and the music too stuck on the windows like warning labels that it might get hotter if you don't slow down and take some water slowly but oh hell no sounds better on the glisten of lips and eyes always make bad decisions but the bad ones feel the best if enjoyed for hours at least so why not hang around the hounds and let them pretend the mastering of that walk by seaside daydreams slow motion notions bending moments into costume jewelry's glittering of your own nude rimmed sunglasses _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I'm hungry for a special little corner cafe, that served some wonderful Mexican food decades ago... It's probably still there... and still as dark and welcoming as ever. Hot stuff, Sir. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and eyes always make bad decisions but the bad ones feel the best if enjoyed for hours at least" isn't that the truth!  yep...now I'm thinkin of something spicy  know just the place |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...Please pass the guacamole!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, yes I think it would be..so many of them hidden around, thanks ms ______________ ms sea, hurry on down, will save you a seat by the window _____________ ms martie, can see you there enjoying the flavors, thanks little neighbor |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
am tasting a buffet of flavors to savor here D. Nicely done. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks little lady |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
pass the sour cream too Stranger the cool white soothes my mouth thanks for breakfast it was delicious… |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, my pleasure to offer you the cup of frothy..my favorite time of day too, thanks ms |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
You are always spot on with the right poem for the right mood of the day. Thank you DS. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Refugee, thank YOU for waving |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
but oh hell no sounds better on the glisten of lips and eyes always make bad decisions but the bad ones feel the best if enjoyed for hours at least ...ah..I love you. Heh. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms K, damn I love it when you say "heh", thanks ms |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
"perhaps a confusing morning of mexican food momentary the red and green kind that makes your mouth cry and smile too wanting more" perhaps also a little reversal of time so I can go back and read this for the first time again. One runs out of intelligent words of praise on these forums. So I'll have to settle for wonderful. cheye |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend cheye, thank you and time for the meeting of this penspeak |
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