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Shades of Green |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Shades of Green Today I walk in shades of green The inner eye of dreamer’s scene A field of flowers walled by tree A wile of yield I have decree I’ve left the present for the past A mental trip that I have cast Into a world of phantoms fold A place that waits when growing old A place of ever present youth Rooted in the earth of truth That keeps us in a field of play A field of gone and yesterday Here I dream of love and lace Of roses, wine and hearts embrace Of prime that’s now beyond my cope It’s here that I in truth elope Its here I see the flying dove Its here I still make ardent love |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, you've gone and done it, and left me with a    |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
As far as I am concerned, everything you write is a keeper. Including this one. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and you left me with a little fold in my heart that reads Sir Sy... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’ve left the present for the past Me, too, my friend... me, too. *S* And you turn me shades of green at how wonderfully you write it! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine May joy take your hand each day.  SmartChick You are a love. Lady You are a charmer.  passing Oh yes. suthern You are a shade of green. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love green! And, I love your poetry! aziza |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza You say the nicest things. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You just are a *word-gift* I give myself with each enchanting read~ 'Here I dream of love and lace Of roses, wine and hearts embrace Of prime that’s now beyond my cope It’s here that I in truth elope Its here I see the flying dove Its here I still make ardent love' You make poetry BREATHE ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
It all comes down to love, doesn't it...that which fills us with vibrance, warmth, and belonging...knowing that someone is always a part of us intrinsically? Beautiful memories are worth revisiting. A life that smiles is worth remembering. Your poems warm my thoughts, Sy! ~ Klassy ~ P. S. I always thought that Love is green. When you plant it, it makes things grow! [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (10-15-2006 12:24 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your understanding just humbles me. Klassy Lassy, What a wonderful thought. "love is green." |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
This is so good!!!The best poem I have read recently probbaly. rhia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rhia_5779 Thank you so much for your generous reply. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Thank you my friend. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
We are more alike than not... M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Yes we are. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Its here I still make ardent love" ~ Every woman's dream! ~ and you ain't that bad at writing poetry, either!!!  Loveya, He-Man! I mean, "T-Man"! Actually, you're a He-Man of a T-Man! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Comming from you I am flattered. |
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