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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-10-09 06:15 PM





Looking in the mirror
I see signs "I'm more like her".
Though different were we raised back then,
At times she would concur.

Our parents kept us laced-up-straight,
But she would break that mold.
Younger then, by seven years,
I lacked her spirit, bold.

I miss her when the seasons change,
When birthdays pass me by.
It saddens me to feel this loss
Of "left behind" to tie...

The ends of loose, that are mine now
With no one here to lean.
I'd give it up if only she'd
Return upon this scene.

Impossible, yet every day
I feel her touch, though light
That pushes me to bear my cross,
Upending me towards right.

Speaking to her, words of thanks,
Wondering how she knows
The needs of mine, disguised in vague,
I've tried not to expose.

I know that if it weren't for her
And moments we shared last,
I'd have held onto the long ago
Still living in the past.


M



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-09-2006 06:58 PM).]

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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2006-10-09 06:53 PM


Sending you Big Hugs, my friend.
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-10-09 06:54 PM


ah hon, hugging you tight.  Sweet, this bond everlasting.  
themute
Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland
3 posted 2006-10-09 07:30 PM


ive always liked independence, but trend setters are inevitable. I liked this though

I am the two-toed wanderer

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
4 posted 2007-01-15 06:06 PM


A fitting tribute to somebody who will always be with you. Though new to the site, I am not new to life (far from it) and I read feelings and sincerity in your words.

Ivor

PS I hope you felt better after Christmas!

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2007-01-15 07:03 PM


Ivor, thank you. This was about my older
(only) sister who passed away about 2 1/2 years ago of cancer. When her birthday comes around and when I need a pep talk, I think of her words during that last year and how she kept me from faltering during the last few years while she suffered and I endured.

Thank you for the kind response.

Maureen

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