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Will Rhyme
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0 posted 2006-06-18 12:17 PM


Are you the one,
I've longed to know...
of sentences unwritten;

of universal modulation,
shared with a moment sacred?

When the turning of word-chance
turns into more than phrases;
then the burning of a glance
churns onto real romance!

if so, then,

please,

untie me, but, hold the knot...tightly!!!
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Frank W. Torres
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1 posted 2006-06-18 08:53 AM

Get down.
Klassy Lassy
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2 posted 2006-06-18 09:18 AM

loveknots

in heartspeak, he breathes
forget-me-nots and music

...thought caught...

embracing designs on
her macrame heart

~ Klassy

What a question!  Well done, Will!  
HopeS
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3 posted 2006-06-18 10:54 AM

Wonderful things can be woven upon the heartstrings

Hope
Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2006-06-18 12:52 PM

a tongue untied
can't be denied
would set the bound heart free.

Enjoyed your whole poem very much, but especially the last line.

Good job.

-Bob
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5 posted 2006-06-18 01:57 PM

excellent words...much enjoyed.
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6 posted 2006-06-18 04:17 PM

liked this!
Enchantress
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7 posted 2006-06-18 04:29 PM

Love this!!  
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Debo
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8 posted 2006-06-20 04:32 PM

Oh what knotts the heart.
And oh the ones that can untie them.
Loved this write

Debo
Will Rhyme
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9 posted 2006-06-20 04:59 PM

Many Thanks to all!


Will
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10 posted 2006-06-20 05:47 PM

He loves me ~ He loves me 'knot'. Flowers

A very sweet poem that made me smile ~ as well as made me want to untie the knot! Flirty 2



Linda
Flowers
Will Rhyme
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11 posted 2006-06-20 11:25 PM

Cute E.A.

and many thanks to ya.

Will
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