Open Poetry #38 |
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Arrows and Fruit That Fell ( two tanka) |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia ![]() |
My Arrows ****** What will my sons be? Will they see their dreams fulfilled? I have shot my bow Arrows, aimed to the future Where I myself cannot go. (rw) * Fruit That Fell *********** My heart full of pride One sixteen, one eleven Centered, Undisturbed Already realizing What "Dad" still sought at thirty |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and heartwarming. Happy Father's Day to you! Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ HAPPY FATHER'S DAY~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Uriah, Getting real low on arrows myself. LOL |
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calxaed Junior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 21North Lincolnshire, UK |
Liked these a lot, and they introduced me to a poetic form that I wasn't previously familiar with. Thanks. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Happy Father'e Day Uriah! Excellent poems. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Happy Father's Day Larry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
These are excellent. Happy Father's day! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Already realizing What "Dad" still sought at thirty" Yes, that's definitely how it goes. Enjoyed your writes, Larry! |
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