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Open Poetry #38
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openthoughts
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 94
Where the child can be free
0 posted 2006-06-16 01:54 AM

I can feel the heat upon my face
Laughing in it's flowing grace
Whilst the flower melts within my hand
as it returns to the crying land

My imperfect words too often spoken
keep the perfect heart from being broken
Lapping greedily at a tender light
and it dims more with every night

A careless mind with equal lips
that drink with slow and careful sips
from a pool i've not seen before
and I pray to see such nevermore
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2006-06-16 07:19 AM

absolutely beautiful poetry, sending this back up to the top for all to read....
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-06-16 04:49 PM

I'm with Lee
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2006-06-16 05:03 PM

I agree!

Great write.

JL


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