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Rambling in the Unknown
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Rambling in the Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Rambling in the Unknown Picking up the memories, their edges smooth, surrounded by the use-to-be's, I wait to shake off the wallflower feeling, those passing thoughts that embed themselves just below the skin, an infinite itch to leave me wanting. I see the truth hidden among expressions of resentment, feel the fear of a moment's mistake wanting to break each fall with softness, pillowed thoughts that will be a treasured tomorrow. I make no sense in the sense that tomorrow comes and brings me more tomorrows that become todays wishing for the todays to be yesterday... wondering the invention of words. Aloneness does not become me as I sit surrounded only... by words. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous, this write and concept. Don't you find, that no matter how you try and plan, destiny always seems to have it's way with us... each and every moment is an adventure...and in our aloneness, we are never truly alone... I find the more times change, the more people need that quality time of aloneness and are understanding the great harmony in it...due to our hectic everyday lives, people seem to be gravitating towards themselves...which is good, cuz if you love the company in self you keep, then relationships will come much easier... just my mere way of thinking, isn't written in stone, that's for sure Enjoyed your writing today... hugs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriend~ 'I sit surrounded only... by words.' Well, with the talented words that accompany you ... I'd say you're in good company~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well Lee said it best excellent write M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I make no sense in the sense that tomorrow comes and brings me more tomorrows that become todays wishing for the todays to be yesterday..." Well ain't this the truth! Understanding you here Maureen. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
:: smiles :: Horizontal vision...Just one darn thing after another. LOL ((( Nakdthoughts ))) Great write ! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
That was interesting....we're always wishing time away, whether for the future or the past. Well done!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I like what you've done here. Especially the part about wwanting to turn todays into yesterdays..i think we can all relate to that |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
in the words of Mr. Burns "EEEExcellent" Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done |
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