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bay of sand song |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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where does my mind swim pococurante between your bay of woman and your lake of lady dare I be meticulous as an unintentional schappe of whisper to seam with ambidextrous unravel hurry with your baskets bring the more you hide and scatter it as leaves on my insatiable fire bring your sand to my ocean let our sins meld to stone what were argillaceous handprints tattoo'd on eudemonic demons hurry your soul slowly to my river ________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-14-2006 12:00 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely, simply lovely |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If, and when, you ever decide to quit writing quixotic change your mind. We would miss you tenderly...  This is a dreamscape... so I thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You are so word wise...and I am hungry! :hug: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Satisfying poem Stranger. Sigh.. I am still envious. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, this feels so good like warm sand slipping between my toes tingling me |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dear pipskin flowers, thank you for your eyes...you bless me much |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
hurry your soul slowly to my river within your river my soul surrendered, my heart follows |
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